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*milk+assassin*, 12 Aug 2008 12:18 pm
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ghm
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ninjies, 12 Aug 2008 12:28 pm
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POOR HERZ ; ; -pets-
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A-chan, 12 Aug 2008 12:43 pm
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Don't say it's ugly when it's not.
I love Herz.
I really love him D:
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Mellos-in-my-closet, 12 Aug 2008 12:52 pm
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Its so good i cant wait for more!
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Pokemon?, 12 Aug 2008 12:53 pm
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LOL Soki. I love that kid. XD And Gloomy Bear.
"But that's not my problem." XD
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LooneyLolita, 12 Aug 2008 01:35 pm
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THE BIG ALIVE GLOMMY IS NOT THE PROBLEM XD
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MitsuWrytr, 12 Aug 2008 02:04 pm
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Next is...Sunny? Right? I'm trying to draw eyes like his..They're so pretty! * 3*
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dip-eiffel-tea, 12 Aug 2008 02:14 pm
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"it's not nice."
haha awww Herz XD<33
and man that is ONE VICIOUS GLOOMY BEAR D8
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Yoowl, 12 Aug 2008 03:42 pm
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I love this page . ._. !
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AutumnOvertures, 12 Aug 2008 04:42 pm
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Aw, Herz. <333
Soki has to watch out for Gloomy's claws.
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Li-Li, 13 Aug 2008 08:23 am
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I love this comic, but....
Grammar mistakes give me brain tumors. Are you interested in perhaps taking on an editor?
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*milk+assassin*, 13 Aug 2008 09:00 am
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I have an editor D: But I always rush with putting up pages and kinda forget to check the spelling D:
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Ringochuu, 14 Aug 2008 10:06 am
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The first panel is amazing! <3 especially the little teeth coming off of his arms. Wow. <3
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Tamasaburo-sama, 14 Aug 2008 11:35 pm
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-And Then...!
I looked on your dA and it said you liked Endling.
I disowned you as a possible Butt-rapee
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Li-Li, 15 Aug 2008 09:07 am
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Oh, no, it's not that. :,D I don't mean to insult you, but some of the passages and word bubbles are strange. Like... 'Differing from my elder brothers I just don't know when I'm going to lose it.'
'Unlike' would be a better substitute for 'Differing'. It makes the sentence flow better.
And in the next panel, having the '...so most of people are just afraid of me' in its own bubble, bringing the 'Yes we are' into a interuppting bubble, and then the 'It's not nice' after that. That way it doesn't look awkward.
So er. That's all. XD
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